tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post116008420911771150..comments2014-09-06T11:14:39.266-07:00Comments on BaxterBlog LHS: Revision and Editing for CW 5thBBAXLHShttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00640259515065479200noreply@blogger.comBlogger72125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1161720532817314102006-10-24T13:08:00.000-07:002006-10-24T13:08:00.000-07:00i aint got no idea man... im not a fan thoughi aint got no idea man... im not a fan thoughAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160086296692784262006-10-05T15:11:00.000-07:002006-10-05T15:11:00.000-07:00Hows the new name treating you BOBHows the new name treating you BOBAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085769951388532006-10-05T15:02:00.002-07:002006-10-05T15:02:00.002-07:00Demetriathank you....i agree to yours tooJennifer ...Demetria<BR/>thank you....i agree to yours too<BR/>Jennifer T.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085759291867172006-10-05T15:02:00.001-07:002006-10-05T15:02:00.001-07:00Haha cool, someone finally replied to one of my po...Haha cool, someone finally replied to one of my posts :)<BR/><BR/>Kayla N.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085698823073642006-10-05T15:01:00.000-07:002006-10-05T15:01:00.000-07:00Kayla N. I totally agree with you that revising ma...Kayla N. <BR/><BR/>I totally agree with you that revising makes us better writers. We learn to look at our mistakes and be aware of them. Because sometimes you got a whole essay written and when you read it again it sound like the work of a 6 year old!<BR/><BR/>Lutz Z.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085646477147692006-10-05T15:00:00.001-07:002006-10-05T15:00:00.001-07:00I stole your name Taylor im pretty sure you stole ...I stole your name Taylor im pretty sure you stole my name.<BR/>Taylor WAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085642998665512006-10-05T15:00:00.000-07:002006-10-05T15:00:00.000-07:00We need to have a debate class.. This class would ...We need to have a debate class.. This class would be perfect for it.. <BR/><BR/>Taylor HAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085576351584782006-10-05T14:59:00.002-07:002006-10-05T14:59:00.002-07:00Everyone has good points.Kayla N.Everyone has good points.<BR/><BR/>Kayla N.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085558577992272006-10-05T14:59:00.001-07:002006-10-05T14:59:00.001-07:00Hailey L.. Yes, i agree.. Baxter makes us.. So we ...Hailey L.. <BR/>Yes, i agree.. Baxter makes us.. So we do what he wants, to get a better grade.. Like little puppets.. Haha..<BR/><BR/>Taylor HAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085550337917722006-10-05T14:59:00.000-07:002006-10-05T14:59:00.000-07:00Thank you MaryCrystal GThank you Mary<BR/>Crystal GAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085503556501232006-10-05T14:58:00.000-07:002006-10-05T14:58:00.000-07:00Good point Crystal.Mary S.Good point Crystal.<BR/>Mary S.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085457201033612006-10-05T14:57:00.000-07:002006-10-05T14:57:00.000-07:00jacei agree with youJennifer T.jace<BR/>i agree with you<BR/>Jennifer T.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085393191316852006-10-05T14:56:00.003-07:002006-10-05T14:56:00.003-07:00Mr. BNo it doesn't mean will improve, but going th...Mr. B<BR/>No it doesn't mean will improve, but going through it will give us the chance. Not revising it won't give us a chance at all.<BR/><BR/>Crystal GAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085385976591482006-10-05T14:56:00.002-07:002006-10-05T14:56:00.002-07:00Hailey, yeah pretty much everyone has commented ba...Hailey, yeah pretty much everyone has commented back to you, lol, but I agree with what you were saying. A big reason why we're doing this is so we can get a good grade cause mr. baxter is telling us to do this.<BR/>LauraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085376909613952006-10-05T14:56:00.001-07:002006-10-05T14:56:00.001-07:00I just agree with everyone.Kayla N.I just agree with everyone.<BR/><BR/>Kayla N.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085358821629342006-10-05T14:55:00.002-07:002006-10-05T14:55:00.002-07:00jace i totally agree with you. sounding like an ig...jace i totally agree with you. sounding like an ignorant peasent is bad. and its also good to be able to reconsider your stand on the papers you write and make them sound better.<BR/>-molly m.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085330734949522006-10-05T14:55:00.001-07:002006-10-05T14:55:00.001-07:00Jace, I really liked what you said about the n...Jace,<BR/> I really liked what you said about the not sounding and looking like a pheasant(it has a Ridder quality sound to it). But it is true how going back to fix or add things to our papers help us as a whole especially on how we come across as.<BR/> -Michelle O.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085316930459382006-10-05T14:55:00.000-07:002006-10-05T14:55:00.000-07:00Laura- You had a good point, that revising helps y...Laura- <BR/>You had a good point, that revising helps you prevent yourself from making the same mistake twice, or three times, or three hundred. That would suck<BR/><BR/>Tiffany D.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085295632145322006-10-05T14:54:00.003-07:002006-10-05T14:54:00.003-07:00Kasey W.I think that you needed to revise your las...Kasey W.<BR/>I think that you needed to revise your last blog.<BR/>-Jace Q.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085252618626242006-10-05T14:54:00.002-07:002006-10-05T14:54:00.002-07:00I think we have to revise everything because it co...I think we have to revise everything because it could help us out to being better writters. If we were required to re-do an assignment because of one single mistake, it could help us know not to have any mistakes at all. <BR/>What we could get out of it would be knowing our assignments are perfect. <BR/>Basically I'm trying to explain what every else already has.<BR/><BR/>Kayla N.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085241920113232006-10-05T14:54:00.001-07:002006-10-05T14:54:00.001-07:00Mr B.. Yeah i agree that by going over our work wi...Mr B.. Yeah i agree that by going over our work will help you, but sometimes it may possibly make it worse, because the first sentences that are on your paper, are the original ideas you came up with.. So maybe they are better than the ones you rivise to? Who knows...<BR/><BR/>Taylor HAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085241393372772006-10-05T14:54:00.000-07:002006-10-05T14:54:00.000-07:00Jace... I was just playing... jeeze laweez... gaaa...Jace... I was just playing... jeeze laweez... gaaaaahAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085231291966002006-10-05T14:53:00.003-07:002006-10-05T14:53:00.003-07:00Lutz Zi agree. because the more you go over things...Lutz Z<BR/><BR/>i agree. because the more you go over things the easyer it will be to remeber them and use them correctly.<BR/><BR/>Allen SAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085208189559572006-10-05T14:53:00.002-07:002006-10-05T14:53:00.002-07:00Taylor H- You're right on the whole making it perf...Taylor H- You're right on the whole making it perfect for you idea. It's good to make sure that your paper gets your message across clearly.:)<BR/>LauraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8986450.post-1160085208181276762006-10-05T14:53:00.001-07:002006-10-05T14:53:00.001-07:00Kasey yeah i totally agree with you because its tr...Kasey yeah i totally agree with you because its true we don't see our mistakes like you didn't notice that you where writing perfict instead of perfect...<BR/><BR/>Thats another good point for the riview assignment!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com